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Thursday, 30 May 2013

Monalisha And Her Toothpaste


Monalisha is usually calm and quite a punctual kind of girl. She’s so full of energy and is extremely active, especially with the household works. She's blessed with two of her very loving, as well as very caring elder sisters and whenever they ask her to do any household work, she never use to say no. For instance, if any of them would ask Monalisha if she could keep the cups and glasses from her living room to the kitchen, she usually would reply very sweetly "yes, I would definitely do that in a moment". Although it’s a different thing that those stuffs would continue to remain there for the next couple of hours and eventually one of her elder sisters would have to take care of them.

In the weekends, Monalisha just love to sleep till 12 noon and I think I'am quite generous on the timing.   She's got a good habit of brushing her teeth twice a day. Usually, immediately after dinner she use to feel some kind of  a magnetic attraction towards her bed, but no matter what? She never forgets to brush her teeth. One night, after everyone had their dinner, Monalisha went inside her bedroom and all of a sudden the power went off. She took it as an opportunity and immediately went to her bed to enjoy a short nap. Even after almost an hour, there was darkness inside the entire house and Monalisha thought to finish off her engagement with her toothpaste.

As power wasn't there, also Monalisha never bothered to light a candle and went inside the bathroom. She tried to grasp hold of her toothbrush and toothpaste. She was only half alive that moment and it took her a while to locate her stuffs, but eventually she got it. She felt that it wasn't her regular toothpaste, as it tasted little different. It didn’t bother her much, as they usually use to keep 2-3 different brands of toothpaste. Monalisha didn't like the taste at all and also the toothpaste couldn’t generate considerable amount of foam inside her mouth. She was little pissed off and put more paste into her toothbrush. Even extra amount of paste  wasn't able to produce much of a foam and on top of that it tasted bizarre. She even felt a little burning sensation inside her mouth. All of a sudden the power came back and the bathroom was illuminated with light. Monalisha could look herself and her toothbrush on the mirror. She was little amazed and kept staring at the mirror with her mouth wide open.

All of a sudden Monalisha started to scream "Oh! My God, OMG what I've done?" Her sisters immediately rushed to the bathroom and asked her "what happened?" Monalisha was totally confused and remained silent for a while. That moment she was holding her toothbrush  on one hand and ODOMOS cream on the other. Well, Odomos is a mosquito repellent cream and after sometime she literally shouted at everyone "who the hell has kept Odomos in the bathroom?"

61 comments:

  1. A Simply enjoyable and funny tale!

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    1. Thanks a lot. I am glad U enjoyed the post!

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  2. Thats funny and so sweet...the story not odomos

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    1. Thanks Yamini, I am so glad U enjoyed the post. Thanks for visiting out here!

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  3. was it an intentional prank ?? tell u Jahid Bhai ..I played this prank on my cousins by applying balm on their toothbrush and then topping it up with toothpaste .. and then got almost one of them addicted.. I swear !!
    I think I will try applying odomos this time .. :D :D :D

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    1. Haha Jack :) I don't think it was an intentional prank. Looks like we both have some similarities :) When I was kid,I did so many such stuffs :)

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    1. Thanks Uma. I am glad U enjoyed the post. Thanks for visiting out here!

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  5. My My !!! :D, Good work Jahid :)

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    1. Hehe Zeba :) Thanks for ur lovely words!

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  6. Well I hope she kept brushing and made the odoMOST of it :P ;)

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    1. Hehe Soumabha :) Monalisha gonna kill you :)

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  7. Oh I hope she didnt swallow any of it, but who keeps ODOMOS in the Bathroom :O

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    1. The taste was horrible so I don't think she swallowed it :) Someone might have accidentally put the Odomos out there in bathroom:) Thanks Bhavya for visiting out here.

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  8. Haha...nice !!
    Liked it!! :D

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    1. Thanks Kriti. I am glad U liked it :)

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    1. Thanks Nidhi :) I am so glad U enjoyed the post. Thanks for visiting out here.

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  10. Odomos in instead of Toothpaste...good one...!!!

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    1. Thanks Anjan. Odomos cream comes with similar shape and sizes :)

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  11. I think I would be hollering about the same thing. hahaha One must keep and 'eye' on what one puts in their mouth hahaha

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    1. Very true Anna, everyone must keep an eye on what they put in their mouth :) Thanks for visiting out here Anna!

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  12. hahaha.. Hilarious!!
    One should be careful with these though.

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    1. Thanks Farooq :) Yes, we must be careful about what we put in our mouth. Thanks for visiting out here dude!

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  13. LOL!! Funny incidents occur at the most unexpected way and time.

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    1. Very true Hetal. Thanks for visiting!

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  14. I had a similar incident during my childhood when I mistook oil for honey. I poured the 'oil' on a slice of bread and finding it tasteless, and yelled about the poor quality of the honey. I had just got up after a afternoon nap and was just getting back into my senses.

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    1. Haha..U too Jeevan Sir :) U mistook oil for honey and even yelled about the poor quality of the honey. quite hilarious incident. Thanks for visiting out here!

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  15. Haha..Actually few days back I almost applied toothpaste on my kids instead of Odomos...before my elder one noticed it...phew thank god!!!!!! :-)

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    1. Haha.. quite the opposite. In ur case toothpaste instead of Odomos :) Good that Ur elder one noticed it :) Thanks for visiting out here!

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  16. I was expecting Da Vinci's Monalisa .... maybe she does not flash her teeth because she used odomos to brush her teeth?

    www.volatilespirits.com

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    1. Haha Anupama :) Da Vinci's Monalisa, very nice sense of humor. Thanks for visiting out here!

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  17. I appreciate the gentle sense of humour in the post. The day to day incidents of life could sometimes be very interesting if viewed with a sense of involvement. A good post indeed.

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    1. Thanks Mr Kajal, I am glad U liked the post. Yes, U are correct, I find day to day life incidents very interesting. Thanks for visiting out here!

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  18. Nice and humorous...... Loved it.....

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    1. Thanks Debopam, I am glad U found the post hilarious and interesting. Thanks for visiting out here!

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  19. that was funny! fancy using odomos!!

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    1. Hehe.. Thanks for reading princess :)

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  20. Was a funny article. Monalisa is at last stunned and discovered the odomos toothpaste.

    also visit - www.indiatalks.tk

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    1. I am glad U liked the post. Yeas, Monalisha was quite stunned at the end. Thanks for visiting out here!

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  21. She can smile to chase those flying suckers away.
    Nicely narrated.

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    1. Haha Navin :) Thanks for visiting out here!

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  22. Yikes!! :D very nicely written. I enjoyed reading it right from its start.

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    1. Thanks Shwets. I am so glad U enjoyed reading the post. Thanks for visiting out here!

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  23. Thank God it wasn't soframicin, eh? :D

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    1. Haha Brendan :) that would have caused hell lot of itching I guess :)

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  24. I will NEVER brush my teeth in the dark after this...

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    1. Haha Katy :) U shouldn't brush Ur teeth in the dark. Thanks for visiting out here!

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  25. Ha Ha ...nice post .. enjoyed reading.

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    1. Thanks Bedanga. Glad U enjoyed the post!

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  26. This is me smiling :)

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    1. Glad I could make U smile :) Thanks for visiting!

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